Date: 2012-06-21 10:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] grausam
oooh, this is wonderful- atmospheric and scary! I love how Karkat's mood changed for the better the moment Sollux woke up- subtile and telling! I also like the sentence "lots of things feel like betrayal right now"

Maybe it could use a bit more ambivalence towards Gamzee (even if we gun for Karkat<>Sollux) on the other hand, it's very interesting how your Karkat doesn't use his name at all, as if he doesn't want to associate his friend with this murder clown
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